Tuesday, August 13, 2019

My Splendid Speech ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘



My speech is about is social media good for teenagers
What i did well was the performance i can improve on performing to my audiance
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  1. AnonymousAugust 13, 2019 at 11:50 AM

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  2. AnonymousAugust 13, 2019 at 11:52 AM

    Hi, my name is Lucy and I am a student in Hub Mako at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked how you had lots of facts in your speech. It made me think that people do need to go outside more. Have you thought about changing the ‘i’ to a capital in your ‘what I did well’? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintlucymu.blogspot.com/

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas

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